Oh, gee! have you ever improved. What did exams do to you?!! You got amazing.

So, let's start with the background, yes yes? ahh, I see where you got the inspiration from yesyes. The bright contrasting colours look really nice, but be careful when brightening up the lower half of the sky, the contrast is hard on the eyes there haha

The only complaint about the lighting on the girl is I would say, make her look more...illuminated? If the sky's going to be super BRIGHT she's gotta be GLOWING LIKE HOLY JESUS. okay maybe not...but adding a white glow around her frontside, or adding a little more highlights (or perhaps darker shadows on her backside)? would make it blend in better with the background.

Perhaps a little more blue in the shadows would look nice as well, I think some more shadows on the legs would be especially nice.

As for HOW you shaded it? beautiful. Like I've always said, you're a pro at shading clothing, especially dresses! the creases and folds look spot-on.

As for anatomy, geeee I love those hands!perspective looks nice too, although if we're looking at her from the angle of...you know. ON THE GRASS ALL NINJA-LIKE? I don't know how to explain this but.. you'd see less of her back I think? you'd see more...butt.

The general atmosphere in this piece is really nice! keep it up bby~! <3

Whoah, you posted it! She no longer dies!

I really like the perspective on this. Really nice approach. I love the serene feeling in this! And the idea of an angel like this is pretty cool! I also adore that dress & pink's not my color. I love the designs on it, simple & clean. AND MEL HEADSHOT WATERMARK FTW!!

As for the coloring, when you shade, it looks like a bit unnatural, you know? Kinda like a burn effect, but better. I suggest adding more black in it (Shades are basically blacks or grays, I believe) & even some red or purple to make her look more alive, like there's blood in her, haha. I'm not sure if that was understandable. XD
Another thing is, I know how the background was inspired by him & how you used dodge for it (Correct?), I think that you could have put dodge in the setting "midtones" & than "highlights." I'm not sure how that would make it look, but it might give it a more natural look to it... ? Maybe. I think a natural sky approach would make it a little better, I don't know, haha.

Overall, I love this! Very eye - catching! Faving!

Hope this was helpful somehow!
Since this is my 1st time using this feature... LOL.